
That afternoon they had gone for a wild ride on the worn and splintery sled of his boyhood, and came as close to flying as a human body could, and when they alit again, he laughed unexpectedly, hardly recognizing the sound, for he was never one to laugh. He knew right away that she would like him a little too much for it.
He would send her away very soon.
And yes, he told himself honestly, remembering it now, he missed the physical closeness, the unrefined howling thrill of feeling, the delicious smell of it, the gripping flesh, unbinding of muscles and sinew and surge of blood and the biting, sucking, swallowing raw lust…she looked sideways at him, in the darkening room, and gave him a very odd apology; what had she to apologize for?
He didn’t answer, but disengaged himself and went to close and latch the window, for it had blown open in the storm. He stood for a long time looking with dispassion at the white fields behind the house, all the way down to the little river, winding its way through whiteness. The snow made the village into something very nearly beautiful, he thought. It did not happen often that loveliness visited here.
P.s. I've been lately enjoying a variety of Gothic tales, with rotten overly controlled and dark heroes, hence this bit of folly
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29 comments:
What a delicious romp....and yes, last summer I spent hours in the hammock with a "collection of gothic tales." Mmmmmm....guilty.
Very raunchy - for a cold December afternoon!
Ah well, sometimes we apologize when we know the other person is wrong. But we get even. Oh, we get even. ;-)
whoa- this is a different take on the photo! Is this what you call a "Bodice ripper"? Fun read-but what happened next?
I really want to hear more of this. The apology has me wondering -- not about her, but about him...
What did she sense?
Pearl
oh yes...i want more...
I would love to know more about him, how he came to this place of dispassion. His darkness ... I sit here with all sorts of scenarios flooding my mind. It's what makes your Magpie wonderful.
OK, if this is the starter, when does the main course begin?!
Poor young woman - does she suspect what's in store for her?
A very lovely and perceptive Magpie.
I've never read a gothic romance.... And yes, I would like to know more about this dark and potentially dangerous young man, what the woman sees in him... and where it all leads!
Titles...we need titles, please.
No apology necessary. I can relate I did that same thing too. I let what I am reading take over today. Great writing by the way.
Oh... I loved it. What a beautiful thing, Gothic romances. What a thrilling, unfulfilling, dark thing it is!
Wonderful writing, so much said, yet so much more to discover. Sometimes the power is in what is left unsaid.
What a wonderful tease! So many intriguing details, so many possibilities. I can imagine so many different outcomes. What will happen to that promising loveliness, I wonder?
Oo-la-la! Dark and delicious bit of Gothic...like Godiva!
I love Gothic!
who hid that story for us to find
I like it. Would definitely enjoy reading some more of this gothic adventure. Thanks for sharing Leah.
This took my breath away..I'm ready for the next page!
This is really nice. I love your closing line.
But in real life those dark heroes can be a right pain in the bum.
I love the texture of this piece, the dark/light, shadow/bright while underneath rides a lusty villain.
Leah I'm shamelessly spruiking a writer's blog that I enjoy http://thetenthdaughterofmemory.blogspot.com
You're a natural, come play.
Hi Leah,
Have I ever told you what a wonderful writer that you are?
Well I have now. And thankyou for pointing me in the direction of Magpie Tales. I'm loving it...
wow! dark and mysterious...more please!
fabulous character! i'm ready to hear all about this dark place.
my my the temperature was definitely rising as I read this magpie--great job!
This is perfect. You know that right? For everything it leaves out. What came before. What comes after. All left up to us, the reader. Perfect, perfect, perfect.
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