Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Apology: in honor of the Gothic Romance




That afternoon they had gone for a wild ride on the worn and splintery sled of his boyhood, and came as close to flying as a human body could, and when they alit again, he laughed unexpectedly, hardly recognizing the sound, for he was never one to laugh. He knew right away that she would like him a little too much for it.

He would send her away very soon.

And yes, he told himself honestly, remembering it now, he missed the physical closeness, the unrefined howling thrill of feeling, the delicious smell of it, the gripping flesh, unbinding of muscles and sinew and surge of blood and the biting, sucking, swallowing raw lust…she looked sideways at him, in the darkening room, and gave him a very odd apology; what had she to apologize for?

He didn’t answer, but disengaged himself and went to close and latch the window, for it had blown open in the storm. He stood for a long time looking with dispassion at the white fields behind the house, all the way down to the little river, winding its way through whiteness. The snow made the village into something very nearly beautiful, he thought. It did not happen often that loveliness visited here.








P.s. I've been lately enjoying a variety of Gothic tales, with rotten overly controlled and dark heroes, hence this bit of folly


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29 comments:

Chantel said...

What a delicious romp....and yes, last summer I spent hours in the hammock with a "collection of gothic tales." Mmmmmm....guilty.

madamebutterfly said...

Very raunchy - for a cold December afternoon!

Fireblossom said...

Ah well, sometimes we apologize when we know the other person is wrong. But we get even. Oh, we get even. ;-)

kathew said...

whoa- this is a different take on the photo! Is this what you call a "Bodice ripper"? Fun read-but what happened next?

Pearl said...

I really want to hear more of this. The apology has me wondering -- not about her, but about him...

What did she sense?

Pearl

Brian Miller said...

oh yes...i want more...

Helen said...

I would love to know more about him, how he came to this place of dispassion. His darkness ... I sit here with all sorts of scenarios flooding my mind. It's what makes your Magpie wonderful.

Jinksy said...

OK, if this is the starter, when does the main course begin?!

jabblog said...

Poor young woman - does she suspect what's in store for her?

Doctor FTSE said...

A very lovely and perceptive Magpie.

Ponita in Real Life said...

I've never read a gothic romance.... And yes, I would like to know more about this dark and potentially dangerous young man, what the woman sees in him... and where it all leads!

MJ said...

Titles...we need titles, please.

Kristen Haskell said...

No apology necessary. I can relate I did that same thing too. I let what I am reading take over today. Great writing by the way.

Karen ^..^ said...

Oh... I loved it. What a beautiful thing, Gothic romances. What a thrilling, unfulfilling, dark thing it is!

Reflections said...

Wonderful writing, so much said, yet so much more to discover. Sometimes the power is in what is left unsaid.

nick said...

What a wonderful tease! So many intriguing details, so many possibilities. I can imagine so many different outcomes. What will happen to that promising loveliness, I wonder?

Tess Kincaid said...

Oo-la-la! Dark and delicious bit of Gothic...like Godiva!

gautami tripathy said...

I love Gothic!

who hid that story for us to find

Mr. Shife said...

I like it. Would definitely enjoy reading some more of this gothic adventure. Thanks for sharing Leah.

Lyn said...

This took my breath away..I'm ready for the next page!

Mary said...

This is really nice. I love your closing line.

Pat said...

But in real life those dark heroes can be a right pain in the bum.

Tumblewords: said...

I love the texture of this piece, the dark/light, shadow/bright while underneath rides a lusty villain.

Baino said...

Leah I'm shamelessly spruiking a writer's blog that I enjoy http://thetenthdaughterofmemory.blogspot.com
You're a natural, come play.

Steve said...

Hi Leah,
Have I ever told you what a wonderful writer that you are?
Well I have now. And thankyou for pointing me in the direction of Magpie Tales. I'm loving it...

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

wow! dark and mysterious...more please!

Everyday Goddess said...

fabulous character! i'm ready to hear all about this dark place.

C.M. Jackson said...

my my the temperature was definitely rising as I read this magpie--great job!

Tracey said...

This is perfect. You know that right? For everything it leaves out. What came before. What comes after. All left up to us, the reader. Perfect, perfect, perfect.